what I had was fake
but my effects were genuine
and that was no mistake
the feelings that I had were real
the words I said were true
the information that was false
was what I got from you
you treated me with placebo
who knew that it would work?
I swallowed the lines you fed me
now I’m feeling like a jerk
all the things you told me
I believed them at the time
just words made out of sugar pills
but they made me feel so fine
now everything you tell me
I just assume is fake
no matter how sincere it sounds
it’s a bitter pill to take
This is fantastic and really such a hard truth for many of us!
ReplyDeletePerfect! but not the broken trust :)
ReplyDeleteVery clever to pair those two types ofdeception. Kudos Charlie.
ReplyDeletebitter pill to take, true.
ReplyDeletelovely take.
A++
its a wonder people change so fast that we really ponder if it has got to do with our own mind or the other persons offensive ways.. here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/paper-scribbles/
ReplyDeleteYikes, Charlie!
ReplyDeleteWhat an awful place to find oneself!
Here's mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2010/05/19/dysfunction/
Good one, Charlie. And sometimes placebos work.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful rhythm and I hear the pain! Very nicely done.
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