Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Addicted

You’re in my veins. 
You‘re in my blood.
You’re in my soul. 
You are my drug.
You’re in my head. 
You’re under my skin.
Don’t remember 
letting you in. 
Now you’re here, 
really good stuff, 
in my life 
can’t get enough.
I need your kiss
I crave your touch
Will I overdose 
if I get too much? 
You’ve got me hooked 
you are my vice 
I’m addicted now 
so, name your price

6 comments:

  1. nah - think it's never possible to get an overdose on love..
    really good stuff charlie!

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  2. i dunno claudia, you get addicted and start doing some crazy things...lol. love is an addiction...under the skin...nice...

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  3. I like balance, but would love for someone to feel like that about me. Good write!

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  4. Hi Charlie

    This one is really very interesting as you developed it with such a beautiful simplicity... and then end... well then end brought me down to earth... can you price such beautiful addiction... of love?
    Thanks for sharing.. I liked it.

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  5. Really good, Charlie. I love the last line. Hopefully, the price isn't too high.

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