Saturday, September 8, 2012

Rain


walking in the warm summer rain
I smell the fresh clean air
tiny droplets running down my cheeks
like tears of happiness
rejuvenated, I return home where I am quickly reminded,
“you realize the rain is just a metaphor, right? ’’
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 12, 2012 at 10:55 AM

    rain could be a metaphor, indeed,

    wise thoughts, thanks for posting.

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  2. Other MaryOctober 6, 2012 at 6:56 AM

    I never met a 4 (met-a-phor) I didn't like! And this is no exception. Kudos.

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  3. UnknownOctober 18, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    sharp.

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  4. Belva Rae StaplesOctober 25, 2012 at 5:55 PM

    Rain does rejuvenate! Nice poem!

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