tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post6444706721497820163..comments2023-10-09T01:53:20.244-07:00Comments on Appetite For Words: Phantom Storm - (Villanelle)Charlie Paranthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06684221320439752073noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-88495213311798932192011-10-14T14:37:34.169-07:002011-10-14T14:37:34.169-07:00Hey! Hey! Liked this very much! Any more tears and...Hey! Hey! Liked this very much! Any more tears and I'll look mellow.....!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-17473411768258634322011-09-19T10:31:25.136-07:002011-09-19T10:31:25.136-07:00amazing...loved it....<3
why dont u get your po...amazing...loved it....<3<br />why dont u get your poetry published in form of a book...i will definitly be ur customer!:D<br /><br />em ur new follower, hope you check out my blog too, i also write quite a lot of poetry :)..the floodgate of feelings..:]https://www.blogger.com/profile/16931573978585103905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-18697557608907549462011-09-11T08:49:40.950-07:002011-09-11T08:49:40.950-07:00Great poem. I know how difficult Villanelles are t...Great poem. I know how difficult Villanelles are to write.Jack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-41464603455909927172011-07-10T08:19:36.268-07:002011-07-10T08:19:36.268-07:00Pretty good, they are bit hard to do, and you did ...Pretty good, they are bit hard to do, and you did very well, Thank you, much appreciated, WSAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-62527433147747734762011-07-06T13:15:39.873-07:002011-07-06T13:15:39.873-07:00Well done
Nice read.
GenebrotherWell done<br />Nice read.<br />GenebrotherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-35350699790070961602011-07-05T16:52:52.636-07:002011-07-05T16:52:52.636-07:00I like your word palette of s's. The sss...le...I like your word palette of s's. The sss...lends a feeling of water swishing and rolling and adds depth to your content!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-75059730237363880512011-07-04T08:18:35.929-07:002011-07-04T08:18:35.929-07:00Nice vivid imagery of the storm coming up the coas...Nice vivid imagery of the storm coming up the coast:))Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-68840115071233144402011-07-03T02:19:25.348-07:002011-07-03T02:19:25.348-07:00I really enjoyed this, eerie and tense. Beautiful ...I really enjoyed this, eerie and tense. Beautiful writingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-1363604088925411122011-07-01T20:55:24.605-07:002011-07-01T20:55:24.605-07:00'They sold their souls to Satan's host
to ...'They sold their souls to Satan's host<br />to sail into eternity'<br />Really like the creative use of words to weave this story. Nicely done!!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-66396400333376619612011-06-30T15:38:17.822-07:002011-06-30T15:38:17.822-07:00Excellent. One feels the anticipation and tension ...Excellent. One feels the anticipation and tension of watching a storm coming.Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-72917034347314500562011-06-30T09:33:13.389-07:002011-06-30T09:33:13.389-07:00How nice to see poetic form alive and well. 'A...How nice to see poetic form alive and well. 'As tortured souls try to break free' captures the immediacy and peril of the situation, both physical and ethereal.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-79102636896563070292011-06-30T05:11:02.077-07:002011-06-30T05:11:02.077-07:00The alternating refrain line really worked well fo...The alternating refrain line really worked well for the tempo. Great write ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-76972436551232774612011-06-29T17:42:31.332-07:002011-06-29T17:42:31.332-07:00Great dedication to the form, and the theme is ent...Great dedication to the form, and the theme is entrancing. You caught me up!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-70995626016068825902011-06-29T15:23:01.278-07:002011-06-29T15:23:01.278-07:00great rhyme structure.great rhyme structure.Jack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-78008581924556520012011-06-29T15:13:57.463-07:002011-06-29T15:13:57.463-07:00dang i bet! wow great!dang i bet! wow great!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-37043254624019346102011-06-29T14:27:14.686-07:002011-06-29T14:27:14.686-07:00amazing.
keep is up.amazing.<br />keep is up.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-55299273502015318862011-06-29T14:10:37.911-07:002011-06-29T14:10:37.911-07:00Nice poem, well written, I like it :)Nice poem, well written, I like it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-37055320490965072672011-06-29T12:36:30.260-07:002011-06-29T12:36:30.260-07:00Well done, Charlie! I like this one a lot!Well done, Charlie! I like this one a lot!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com