tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post4838166766949302652..comments2023-10-09T01:53:20.244-07:00Comments on Appetite For Words: InsomniacCharlie Paranthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06684221320439752073noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-35243515459317104042011-02-26T15:37:43.899-08:002011-02-26T15:37:43.899-08:00Well written here..I feel your insomnia often!Well written here..I feel your insomnia often!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-18251027946480201302011-02-25T17:42:37.344-08:002011-02-25T17:42:37.344-08:00I read that really fast like it wanted me to run a...I read that really fast like it wanted me to run and pant and who knows-he collapsed into a dreamless state-because of his poetic pace of pure exhaustion.<br />But the rhyme and rhythm was perfect. You ought to be proud of yourself...at least don't lose any sleep over it.<br /><br />OneLove-Tiger WindwalkerBig Sur Blogispherehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13080435178381510742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-25059525177175756832011-02-25T14:21:30.321-08:002011-02-25T14:21:30.321-08:00Insomnia sucks but you've written this poem so...Insomnia sucks but you've written this poem so eloquently. I hear you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5074891590264251510.post-72314829337095016022011-01-12T06:33:00.552-08:002011-01-12T06:33:00.552-08:00Like the way this reads. For some reason reminds m...Like the way this reads. For some reason reminds me of a Dr. Seuss story, maybe the simplicity of using short phrases to show the flow of thoughts, or perhaps lines:<br />'try to drown<br />the thoughts I think'<br />Very "Suess-ish." Nicely written!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.com